Donal Mahoney
In In Break Formation, Donal Mahoney captures the haunting and heart-wrenching reality of mental illness through vivid imagery and raw emotion. The poem unfolds in a domestic setting, where the speaker recalls the signs of his partner's unraveling, comparing them to fighter planes in a perfectly executed dive. As her humming rises to unbearable heights, the speaker is brought back to a painful past, remembering broken dishes and frantic phone calls. The poem poignantly illustrates the inevitable repetition of a familiar, tragic cycle and the quiet despair of watching a loved one slip away. In Break Formation is a powerful meditation on love, loss, and the unrelenting grip of mental illness, conveyed with a lyrical intensity that lingers long after the final line.